The Heroes of Olympus Percy Joins Chaos

Musabbir-Noor posted on May 22, 2012 at 09:16PM
Hey Guy's
This is a fanfiction. It takes place after the giant wars. All the gods start having more kids. One of them is called James. He was Percy's half brother. Everyone started to forget about Percy. Soon even Annabeth forgot him and started going out with James. Percy had enough. /he was running away. Unknown to him Chaos, creator of the universe, was watching him. He was teleported to a distant planet. After liberating them, there was a problem on earth. After 10,000 years he was returning home.

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over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
yes new page have cake
over a year ago Avidsel said…
Thanks for great update :D HAH! Take that Annabeth! He moved on without you! Wonder what the reactions will be when they find out he married to Bianca :O
over a year ago Pegasus100 said…
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Yah I can't wait for that part either.
POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago zaheer_abbas123 said…
awesome chapter once again im excited about the next chapter and other series percy RULES!!!!!
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
posting 2morrow
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
Im posting now. Patience.
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
Chapter 15
Annabeth

The transmission obviously meant that we can ambush them know. I was too upset to care. Percy had moved on. He had a son. Who was the wife? She had to be drop dead gorgeous. I can't believe I ever cheated on him. i regret it. A lot. A scream broke out and my thoughts were interrupted.
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
That is really short. Im updating 2morrow after 4:00 cuz of Kaplan.
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
comment!!!
over a year ago Pegasus100 said…
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Wow great chapter. When you posting?
POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago DoTH said…
uhhhhh.....you were going to post yesterday......you still haven't posted....did a drakon eat you?POSTTTT
POST
over a year ago ChampionChaos said…
smile
Its a great story, but don't demand reply's. If makes you seem needy. We have a choice to reply or not. But great story. Try not to have Percy too perfect, add some flaws.
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
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hey guys. sry. was out of commision. Broken leg.
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
another 2 comments and im posting.
over a year ago Avidsel said…
Urghh I hate people holding story hostage :/ Guess thats 1 post towards at least :/
over a year ago zaheer_abbas123 said…
oh!!sorry to hear about ur leg how is it??
if u cant post due to injury please dont strain urself take ur time we will wait until u get welll...:)
anyways getwell soon........:)
over a year ago Pegasus100 said…
worried
U posting?
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
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sry guys i was busy im posting now.
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
Chapter 16
Ace

We listened to what my dad had to say when I heard a scream. I went outside to check what it was and found that a small army was attacking us. only a thousand monsters. Boring. i sighed and drew my sword. Between me and the army it will only take a couple of minutes to wipe them out. i drew my sword, Streamer and started attacking.

I sliced dozens of dracene with each strike. I used the very force of gravity to help me. I crushed the entire army. The smaller ones died immediately. After this there were only a 100 monsters left. They included Lystrigian giants, hell hounds, and hyperborions. Even they were distorted.

The campers were just watching wide eyed. I sighed. Losers. I summoned huge amounts of plasma and took care of the rest of the monsters.

I walked back to the shocked campers and said "Where were we before we were interpreted?"
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
It's short sry.
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
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Great chapter when are u posting again your story rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago book-worm said…
That's awesome!!! I just found your story and LOVE it!!!! Please post soon!!!
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
sad
PLZ post soon dieing to find out what happens next
over a year ago greekgeek7083 said…
big smile
post soon
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
Read my latest story

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over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
i'm posting in 3 days.
over a year ago book-worm said…
3 DAYS?!?!??! How about 3 hours? 3 minutes? 3 seconds?
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
crying
Can't wait for 3 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
any1 gonna read my new story. Leave a comment
over a year ago book-worm said…
You have a new story?
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
ya heres the link

link
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
this is y its taking me so long to post. I'm writing 2 stories.
over a year ago book-worm said…
Oh nice
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
laugh
When are u going to post, your new story is cool
over a year ago book-worm said…
I read your MoA and it was good. Don't abandon it!!!!! Post soon!!!!!
over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
k guys posting today
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
Yay!!!!!!
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over a year ago Musabbir-Noor said…
Chapter 17
3rd person POV

After everyone was seated again one of the campers blurted out "how did you do that."

Ace just shrugged it of "Basic sword fighting and I used the force of gravity."

"You call that basic" one of the campers asked in awe.

Ace was getting slightly annoyed but used this chance to brag about his dad "Compared to what my dad could do. If we make it to the randevpous in time you can watch him. He bends time, earth, fire, water, air, nature, and death into 1 as he fights " Ace finished proudly.
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
laugh
Cool
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
i like it
over a year ago LORDCHAOS said…
big smile
I'm reading this story again!
over a year ago book-worm said…
I love this please post soon!!! ^i might have to read again so I don't go crazy!!!!
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
Post soon!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago somisista said…
surprise
this is intense!
over a year ago book-worm said…
Please post soon!
over a year ago cass-bosch said…
angry
Post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
over a year ago somisista said…
worried
POST NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!
over a year ago book-worm said…
Post please!!!
over a year ago kkw1700 said…
So much for 3days....
over a year ago book-worm said…
haha I was just thinking the same thing let me see when he was last on