This is a very interesting story. I would.definitely like to read more.
Hope u post a chapter soon!!

Post soon, please.

This seems like it might be good.

looks awesome post soon

im bout to post in 20 minute..

@Kaia143- thanks for leaving a comment.
@Icrs50- thanks for the comment. I'll post twice a day.
@horse22133454- thanks for your opinion.

It's good to have others opions. My 16 year old sis is helping me with this story

Chapter 1.-The Newborn Goddess-

Jordan was the hot topic of olympus . Everywher you went they talked about her. I n the stores of olympus she was on every magazine cover. The Good ,The Bad ,and The Godly.she was on Godteen (seventeen), she was on Immortal Weekly (Us Weekly) ,even Godsmopoliton.
Jordan started a new hair trend.It's called"The Peacock Feather"
She was always happy never sad.She brought warmth where ever she went.Her beautiful smile mad everyone's day.Just looking at her made you feel safe.She was always there there and if you ever met her you couldn't help but love her.She radiated happiness throughout olympus.
Everyone was happy for the newborn goddess.She was well loved .People were always walking by her nursery.She always had visitors in her room.Many God's and Goddess's held her 'but she always felt uncomfortable unless it was her parents or one of her siblings or aunt's and uncle's.One day the roman war goddess Bellona decided to visit.When the baby goddess met Bellona she smiled at her ,but what confused everyone was that she let Bellona hold her.That day Bellona changed. She actually smiled.No one had ever seen the goddess smile.
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i will post tommorow is it too short. comment

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That's kewl. I wish I had a brother or sister to help me, but I don't. That's okay though.
Hope u can post again soon.

i will post at 5:00 pm then seven they will be longer

That coment was ment for before the chapter..... hehe sorry. I posted it late hehe ;-p!!

Btw, awesome chapter. It was really good.
I loved it.
And I can not wait for tomorrow for ur chapter. I hope.it comes soon!!

Awesome post soon

im starting a new story it's before this so this story is like a follow up

post soon, please.

also, what's your new story?

post soon i luv stories dat r different nd new

awesome
post soon

Pretty please post again soon!!!!!!