it sound good, its alright, I have hundreds of vews on one of my forums but not a single comment ... except ones by me :) its called wizards don't exist
i dont think it would hurt to put Aphrodite in it. She could get mad at Cupid (you can have the Roman one-Cupid- or the Greek-Eros) for ruining two perfect couples or something like that..?
I like the Aphrodite idea. Maybe you could mix Thalia in there with someone (cough Nico cough) and involve Artemis. You might want to consider changing the title though, to get more views. Right now it's confusing, gives away the plot, and dosen't really want to make you want to read it. Sorry, I don't mean to be harsh but that's what I would change. Posting the 1st chapter would also help people comment so that they have something to comment on.
I like the aphrodite idea. Sounds good. I agre with number1pjfan about the other character and stuff.
And changing the tittle would probly be good to. Post soon.
yeah i have 3 chaps i wrote already on paper t just neds to be typed and i have many project each semester i have 5 projects im doing my ss now and its due on the 27 and i didnt do anything yet
I hope you can post later. The title is much better now, good job! You do sorta need to post often though, to keep us rabid fans happy but I will try not to get too irritated.
i am sorry fans but its has to wait this project is due next monday on the 27 and i have a 7 pages reoprt to write and model to make and a poster board for this project
it is so stupid i hate projects im super sorry
Chapter 1
We finally beat Gaia. We were all extremely happy at the outcomes of the war. We all came out safe and sound. I guess Hera’s plan did work and now peace has come to both camps. Annabeth and I finally could have time to spend together. Boy I was wrong, I knew the minute Jason came out the Agro 2 we would be enemies one day. Also for more info of how I knew was because Jason and Annabeth were always chit chatting on that ship to each other and ignore me.
Give me feed backs plz
That was really good! It wasn't a large sample but I really like your writing style. Sorry I didn't review earlier but I was at my sports banquet. Sometimes it may take people up to a day to review so don't get discouraged. Nice job so far!
My favorite pov is when the author tries to keep it in the pov of the main person but occasionally changes so you see what's happening elsewhere. Do what you like though or what goes best with your story line. YOU are the author. I'm in 8th grade. You might want to delete that though. I'm 13 and in 8th grade so you can't pbe 13 and in 6th grade. You're sup post to be at least 13 to go on fan pop. I won't report you but there's a chance someone else would.
Well if you have to do a project, at least it's on a cool topic. It's GREEK! Plus while you do research for it, you can use the info you find in your story.
Chapter 1
We finally beat Gaia. We were all extremely happy at the outcomes of the war. We all came out safe and sound. I guess Hera’s plan did work and now peace has come to both camps. Annabeth and I finally could have time to spend together. Boy I was wrong, I knew the minute Jason came out the Agro 2 we would be enemies one day. Also for more info of how I knew was because Jason and Annabeth were always chit chatting on that ship to each other and ignore me.
Just because he went on a quest to save Hera, Killed a Titan, and goes on the quest to kill Gaia does not mean he can try to take Annabeth like that. Well, i have gotten more curious when the Romans moved to Louisiana. That Annabeth girl keeps on leaving the camp borders and driving her car to the roman camp. At first, I thought she was running errands, but after a while i could not stand the curioussity so i folowed her. I know I know its like stalking but i had to know. and the minute I got to camp i knew I smelled trouble in the air, but I still went. And guess what
the minute i went into Jason's cabin I saw......................................
