The Heroes of Olympus Two New Olympians

PersesJr posted on Aug 17, 2011 at 12:45AM
Hey guys my last forum was not good so I decided to make a new one.So please read,comment and tell friends about this.Enjoy it

Disclaimer:I dont own anything that Rick Riordan made.
Hey guys my last forum was not good so I decided to make a new one.So please read,comment and tell fr
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over a year ago pjlover212051 said…
great post soon
over a year ago pjlover212051 said…
What about your other fanfic.
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Well i dont know,i think it was not a gud forum and i got other ideas so dats y i started another forum
over a year ago unknownquestion said…
I like the picture oh and post soon
over a year ago RomanGreekDemi said…
Post! This sounds pretty interesting :)
over a year ago vlad_todd_fan said…
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Interesting...intriguing. But post soon you can't keep ur fans waiting.

Oh and please check my forum. It's the events that happened between Last Olympian and Lost Hero

link
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
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well post soon plz
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
angelic
dude posting might be good?
over a year ago PersesJr said…
sad
@Percy99jackson-I will post at around 2,i would of posted yesterday but my internet was acting up.
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
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its 4:13 pm here
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
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and thats ok
over a year ago vlad_todd_fan said…
Just be sure to take your time and don't rush
over a year ago Percy2 said…
Post
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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SORRY I HAVE NOT POSTED,MY CONNECTION KEPT ACTING UP,I PROMISE THAT I WILL POST TOMORROW.

THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Here's the first chapter,I have kept you waiting long enough.Enjoy it.

Chapter 1

Percy

I woke up to the sound of Annabeth saying wake up seaweed brain.
"But its only 6:30 in the morning,I replied.
"So its time to wake up,and how did you get the time right,Annabeth said.
"I don't know,I replied.
"What ever get up its time for breakfast,Annabeth said.
"Okay just give me 5 minutes,I said
AS soon as I hit the shower I felt power surge through me.As fast as I had got in the shower I got out in 5 minutes time.I don't know how my timing is correct all of the sudden now.Its kind of freaking me out a bit.After lunch I went to the Arena.I was awarded a kiss from Ms.O'Leary.I played with her a little bit and practice my sword skills with some dummies.After 3 hours of training I made way for the beach.I sat down and watched the waves.Then out of the sea came a mans head.Then the rest of his body.Quickly I took out my pen.But a voice said "so you will attack your own father".The tone of the voice was not angry but calm.By then I knew it was my father who has spoke.
"Oh sorry father,I said.
"No need to apologize son,Poseidon said.
"So how have you been Percy,he said.
"Fine,I replied.
"So I guess you are wondering why I am here,Poseidon said.
"Well I came here to offer you training lessons,he said
"I want to teach you how to use your power over water comes easy to you,also I will teach you how to make Earthquakes and Hurricanes",he said.
"Of course I will let you think about it,Poseidon said.
"I accept it father,I said
"Oh okay that's good training begins at 11:00 tomorrow and tell Chiron okay",Poseidon said.

With that he vanished in sea water.After that I left the beach and got ready to go to lunch.



Sorry its short I will post more tomorrow.By the way if any of you have ideas on how to make my story better tell me.And I post every day starting today.

Comment plz

over a year ago tessa34567 said…
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really cool!!!!
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
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cool!!!post soon but your kinda copying the new olympan
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Lol at Percy99Jackson yeah I kind of have been copying it.But not all of it just the part when Poseidon trains Percy and Annabeth getting killed.Hope he does not get mad.
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
i don't mind as long as the remix is entertaining.
(in my idea of Histia's child there is no romantic involvement of Percy and her.just the child is born due to the power of the two beings. Annabeth is not made to die in such a version.) anyways i will see how your story develops and reserve my judgement for now.
(you are awesome. you should know that.so don't worry.)
keep posting.
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
when are you posting the next chapter?
post soon.
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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@ajatashatru thx and I took your idea of Percy and Hestia having a baby only with my they start to devolope fellings for each other and Annabeth gets killed.
over a year ago vlad_todd_fan said…
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Poor annabeth

But it's pretty good
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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HEY GUYS I WAS SITTING DOWN AND I GOT THIS CRAZY IDEA.INSTEAD OF HESTIA AND PERCY HAVEING A BABY SOME ONE ELSE WILL.IT WILL BE SHOCKING,INTERESTING AND SURPRISE FOR REAL.
over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
hmmm
venus with percy?
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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How did you know?
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Hey guys here's the chapter for today.Enjoy.

Chapter 2

Percy

I made it to lunch just in time to hear Chiron's announcement.
"Today is friday and as you know when have capture the flag",Chiron said.
With that the campers burst out of cheers.Capture the flag is the camps favorite game.The Ares cabin look forward to it every friday.
"So now that its out of the way lets eat",Chiron said.
After lunch I went to the woods to relax a little.While I was walking I found an egg.It was the color of blue and as every body knows I love the color blue.I got closer to the egg and tried to touch it.But before I could a crack appeared in the egg.Suddenly a head popped out.Then the rest of its body popped out.I was surprise to see that it was a baby dragon.How did a dragon egg get in the woods.The baby dragon saw me and started walking towards me.I started to walk back but I walked back into somebody.I turned around to see that the person I walked into was Aphrodite.
"Hello there Percy",she said.
"Oh hello Aphrodite,I replied.
"Why are you walking away from a baby dragon",she said
"Oh no reason",I said.
"Don't tell me the great Perseus Jackson is scared of baby dragons",Aphrodite said with a smile.
"Come on take it as a pet its a gift from me",she said.
"Not to be rude but why did you get me a baby dragon",I said.
"Well didn't I tell you when we first met",Aphrodite said.
"No,and dragons breath fire and water and fire don't get along too well"I said.
"Oh don't you remember I told you that I like you,and don't worry because that dragon don't breath fire it breaths ice,"Aphrodite said.
"Oh so that means that its an ice dragon,I said.
"Yeah its really rare so take good care of it and it also only drinks water,"Aphrodite said.
With that she started to glow.I knew what was going to happen so I looked away and waited for the glow to disappear.I looked up at the sky and notice that it was really late.Oh crap I missed the capture the flag game.Man time goes fast,too fast.Annabeth will be so mad at me when I tell her about what happened.As if I don't got enough things to explain.So I took the baby dragon with me and walked out of the woods and made way for the big house.

Comment plz,tell me if it was good cause I think this was not a good chapter.
over a year ago ajatashatru said…
you are sending a married (and unfaithful) woman after Percy.
this is dangerous. post more.
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over a year ago Percy99Jackson said…
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i was supicious about venus when you changed your mind and i agree with ajata
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
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holy moly!!! that is good!!! i shoyul of read this before!!! Aph!! get out!!!! is he baecoming a god? im clueless here....Cant wait for the next post!!!
over a year ago vlad_todd_fan said…
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Oooooooooooooohhhhhhhh dragons!!!!!!!!! <3
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
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wow did not see that coming,

ps sneak peak, im my story im planning on kiling annabeth too, but percies going to fall for a roman girl
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Good,thats what I was thinking about doing.
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
mischievous
great minds think alike
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
mischievous
yo dude post
over a year ago Percy2 said…
Amazing post soon
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
mischievous
Lalallala!!!! Orange pandas!!!
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
hmmm
???
over a year ago anaklusmus16 said…
angry
huh???? T AC o.O

and dude post already
over a year ago green-art-ac-pj said…
mischievous
hahaha im just waiting for the post...
pink ladybugs! oh wait did i jus say that?
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
hmmm
once again

???
over a year ago anaklusmus16 said…
wink
i agree with thunderwol233
????????
are we saying random things if we are then

purple monkeys
over a year ago AmazingPercy said…
it was good
and totally unexpected
with dragons
great job
post soon
over a year ago percy359 said…
mischievous
muhhhhaaaaahhhhaaaa i am an evil random dude reading percy jackson
over a year ago PercyJackson133 said…
laugh
Sweet I can't wait for the next chapter mate
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
mischievous
I have decided to call perceus jrr PJ
over a year ago thunderwolf233 said…
angelic
PJ, you should probably get a posting schedule up.
over a year ago vlad_todd_fan said…
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Indeed and ive got more chapters written PJ
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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@thunderwolf233 I will post a chapter a day starting today.
@everyone else thank you for commenting and I will post 2 chapters today.
over a year ago greektrickster said…
hey i think you took the idea from Eragon book,right,anyway awesome chapters,post again i want to read more...
over a year ago PersesJr said…
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Here's the first chapter for today.Enjoy.

Chapter 3

Jason

When I woke up I was confused.I just had a dream of lady Venus and a guy named Perseus Jackson talking like they known each other since first grade.That's not possible because Venus is way older then this guy called Perseus Jackson.They didn't talk for long but Venus told the boy to take the dragon as a pet and a gift from her.After she started to glow and then vanished.A few minutes after thinking about the dream I went to the bathroom to take a shower.When I was done I put on a pair of pants and a purple camp shirt.I stepped out of my cabin and almost crashed into Hazel Coltton.
"Oh hi Jason I was just about to get you",Hazel said while panting.
"Get me for what", I said.
"Lady Lupa told me to get you because the Olympians have requested a chat with you",she said.
"Okay thanks for tell me",I said
"No problem",she said
With that I walked to the big house to see all the 12 gods sitting on chairs.First I bowed to my father which is Jupiter and then Juno my patron goddess.
"Hello father,Juno",I said.
"Hello son",Jupiter said his voice booming.
"I suppose you are wondering why we have called you here.Well we have decided to give you a gift.The gift if you accept is to become a god",Jupiter said.

A god,me become a god.Which means never dieing and power.I thought about for a few seconds and decided why not.
"I accept sir,I said.
"Okay then,Jupiter said.
He raised his hands and light appeared out of no where.Then out of no where I felt pain like no other.It was like every bone in my body was creaking.A few minutes later the pain stopped.Before I was blacked out I heard Jupiter said all hail Jason God of Heroes and bravery.


Comment and sorry its short the next chapter will be up soon.